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Yellow Flash
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PostSubject: Yellow Flash's Song's   Yellow Flash's Song's EmptyThu Jul 09, 2009 12:28 pm

I have written a few songs over a few years and just thought about posting them up for your thoughts on them:
Here is the first one:
I will be writing notes for this soon......
First Sight


(First verse)
I was walking down the street, through the dust and dreary rain
Just try-ing to forget all of my pain
But, then I looked and saw your reddish-golden hair
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was you right there

(Second verse)
You looked at me, I looked at you,
And then sudd-en-ly I just knew
But then, you were swept away
And I still haven’t, found you to this day.

(Chorus)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

(Third Verse)
So now I look, everywhere for you
I don’t why, I just need to
You stole my heart, that fateful day
Know I need you, in everyway

(Spoken)
So Now I sing

Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?

(Chorus)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

Solo

(Chorus)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

(Spoken)
So Now I sing

Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
(Spoken)
So Now I sing
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?

(Chorus, starting to fade….)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

So Now I sing

(Fade off too end.)
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?

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PostSubject: Re: Yellow Flash's Song's   Yellow Flash's Song's EmptyThu Jul 09, 2009 11:38 pm

Wow, those lyrics are impressive. Can't
wait to see the notes that go with them.

(and I think you forgot the word "know" in the third verse)
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PostSubject: Re: Yellow Flash's Song's   Yellow Flash's Song's EmptyThu Jul 09, 2009 11:43 pm

Thanks
Yeah, I should be writing notes soon....
It's just I'm really good at writing lyrics and a tune, but when it comes to notes....
So I need to find a friend who can help me with this
(Thanks for telling me)

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